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Ardo Zubairu
06-06-2007, 12:05 PM
hi forum, i am now a newspaper column writer with Abuja Journal but Did you ever turn around one day and suddenly realize that something very important to you has completely changed? It happened to me recently ... with my brother. I was 5 when Kawuri came into my life. Until then, I had been an only child and thoroughly enjoyed it. "Spoiled rotten" would be accurate. So I had mixed feelings - as mixed as a 5-year-old's feelings can be - about my brother. But he quickly endeared himself to me.

It wasn't his charm that did me in, but his humor. My brother can't tell a joke to save his life - something he gets from Mom. My mother has always placed him on a pedestal that I could never reach, no matter how hard I tried. And kawuri doesn’t hate it. But he does the darndest things. When Kawuri was 3, there was a gas truck driving down our street. The truck had a huge nozzle attached to the tank like an elephant's trunk. Mom explained the truck was sniffing for gas leaks from upper filling station, as it drove up and down the street. Kawuri was fascinated.

So he made a new game: "gas sniffer." Kawuri put his nose to our hallway carpet and went up and down the hall sniffing for gas. He played for hours. Then he started to wail.
Kawuri had brushed-burned his nose so badly that it gushed blood. For weeks he had a huge scab on nose.

A year or two later, Kawuri was in the imaginary friends stage all kids go through. But kawuri put a twist on it. He had an imaginary mouse. Mousey came to dinner, rode in the car, and went on vacations. He was a regular part of the family. One day Mousey disappeared. Kawuri said he wouldn't be coming to dinner anymore until his mousey reappeared; so Dad set a mini table for him but it was never the same.

By age 4, Kawuri was truly fun to play with - and boss around. My friends and I made him play school with us. I'm sure I'm the reason he's so intelligent. I taught him how to read, add and subtract, but at 4 he just couldn't catch on to long division. And just like in school, if he was bad, I made him sit in the corner.

If he ever had an identity crisis, I know that's my fault. I loved to dress him like a little girl. He looks really cute in a bonnet.kawuri made his ultimate blunder when he was 7. He's infamous for this one. He was playing superhero one night. He had his little cap on and was running around in his pajamas. Dad and I were in the parlor watching American movie” the good, the bad and the ugly” when kawuri ran up the steps and into the room. He threw his hands on his hips and yelled, "I'M UGLY!"



Dad and I fell to the floor laughing. Kawuri ran to the bedroom and asked Mom, "What's ugly mean?” When I left for secondary school, kawuri was still a little runt. But slowly I noticed some small changes - deeper voice, a little extra height. But it didn't really strike me that he was growing up 'til last year.

My wedding was quickly approaching, and I wanted to get a professional portrait of kawuri, me and my fiancé. I planned to go home for the weekend and told kawuri to keep Saturday free so we could get the pictures taken. I’d been pretty busy that week and hadn't gotten around to calling him. When I came back from work one night, there was a message on my machine."Hey Ardo, It's kawuri. That Olan Mills photo palance called today with some special offer. I made us an appointment for noon Saturday. It's all taken care of."

I was shocked. My goofy little brother was taking care of something. He was being responsible. That's when I realized it - he's not so little anymore. We all go away to university thinking the rest of the world stops. It doesn't.

Life at home goes on without us. Stores change owners, neighbors move away and our little sibs grow up. Things will never be the same again, except in our memories.
Kawuri’s a 400 level student in university now. And he's quickly becoming a jock - playing polo and football. He's quite the ladies' man (whatever that means) and his friends tease him about his harem. He's smart, too (I'll still take credit for that one).

He's kind a cross between Ebuka and Katung of the Nigeria big brother. Kawuri’s got Ebuka' looks, charm, humor and intelligence and Katung's athletic ability and knack for women. But to me, kawuri will always be my "ugly" little brother, the kid with the scabby nose.

Trump
06-06-2007, 12:41 PM
Wow, that was a little hard to follow. I think you almost spent too much time bouncing around childhood memories and I had forgotten what your main point was. But yeah, things change, sometimes for the better sometimes for the worse.

mugen
06-06-2007, 12:48 PM
Wow, that was a little hard to follow. I think you almost spent too much time bouncing around childhood memories and I had forgotten what your main point was. But yeah, things change, sometimes for the better sometimes for the worse.
I actually think it was a nice read and not hard to follow at all. But anyway everybody changes and you usually to become someone you never expected to become, if that makes any sense :S

Ardo Zubairu
06-06-2007, 01:30 PM
Wow, that was a little hard to follow. I think you almost spent too much time bouncing around childhood memories and I had forgotten what your main point was. But yeah, things change, sometimes for the better sometimes for the worse.I have been writing since I was sixteen and my articles appear weekly in Abuja Today and in Abuja Journal on Reminiscent page as a Column writer in Print. Check this website www.fct.gov.ng.

mawande
06-06-2007, 01:47 PM
Um... Ardo, just one thing... at the beginning your message felt very like the spam I sometimes receive. Like it was suddenly going to turn into "Now, my brother is dying of cancer! The only chance to get a life-saving operation is if we have the money, won't you please send us some help?"

Other than that, though, I read it.

akitaka
06-06-2007, 01:52 PM
You might want to post these in the Creativity Forum. They are your original works, after all.

Kfisher
06-06-2007, 02:27 PM
I like the story, the ugly part is dead funny too. So, how old is your brother now again?

also, random thing...

Nigeria big brother

You gotta love the Big Brother franchise. They're all over the world. :P

Josh
06-06-2007, 05:38 PM
Ah, that reminded me of some stories about my younger siblings.

Great story.

Shishio
06-06-2007, 06:22 PM
The only permanent thing in life is change.

h2orowe
06-07-2007, 12:46 AM
That was a good story, Ardo. I enjoyed it. I'll check into your other writings sometime soon.


This reminds me of both my little cousin, and l337moomoo in a way. My little cousin (the same one I do Jeet Kun Do with) has always sort of looked up to me as someone he likes to be like. I did the same with his older brother up until I was 13 and then I began imitating my older brother for a year or so until I found out who I was, personally.

Anyway, if my opinion was that blue was the best color, my little cousin's opinion became that blue was the best color. My little cousin got into video games and such because I liked video games and such. He started watching certain shows because I watched certain shows. He always tried to be like me in every single way. I'd get annoyed occasionally, but I always have/always will love the kid. Around last year, or so, he began to change completely. For the better.

He started working out, and his mom started sending him to therapy (his parents went through divorce and his mom up until around last year was a VERY bad closet alcoholic. She'd drive drunk with him lots of times, and things were just weird.). I remember the first time I went to his house and saw that he had a friend of his own come over! I was so proud of him, haha. He had always hung out with me as his best friend, and my friends as his other friends, pretty much. He talked about other kids from school, but he never really hung out with any of them; sure, he'd go to their birthdays sometimes, but he would always either be home playing video games or reading instead of having friends over/going to their houses and being social.

Nowadays, he hangs out with friends quite often, he's getting pretty buff (he used to be pudgy, but now he's pretty thin.), he's got his diabetes under control, and he's becoming his own little person. It's crazy to watch him grow up. Much like your "ugly" little brother will still always be your little brother to you, my little cousin will always remain the same little cousin who idolized me and always tried to go out of his way to impress me. Although, now, in martial arts, he's trying to show me up XD but I won't allow it.

As for L337moomoo.. I've been friends with that guy since kindergarten. Not just friends, but best friends. Not really best friends either, more like brothers. When we were younger, we'd be sobbing whenever he'd have to leave my house, or I'd have to leave his. He'd spend more time at my old house during the Summer than he did at his house, pretty much; we'd always play video games and toys and such all day, then at night we'd go swimming and stay up til 5 A.M. to watch TV.

I read this thing that said something like "Good friends will bail you out of jail, best friends will be sitting in the cop car next to you saying 'man... we messed up.'" Matt is that guy. In fact, it'd probably be his fault for getting us into the cop car in the first place. Me and him have been on all sorts of nutty adventures, whether it being walking around the city of Orange before sun-up and exploring things until 9 A.M., skating for hours and hours and hours, probably chugging a million gallons of soda between the two of us (yet he's always remained skinny >=| ), picking up women, starting bands, and even just hanging out, me and him have always been a crazy duo. There were times when he was an asshole to me, and times when I was an asshole to him, but.. after hanging out with someone for over 3/4 of your life, you wouldn't be able to NOT get into little arguments and such.

Me and Matt have both influenced each other a lot over the years. I got him into lots of different music (although he basically listens to whatever now :P), paintballing (although he ended up going a lot more than me XD because his family has the money to do such), surfing, and other things. He got me into skateboarding, helped me gain confidence and not be such a softcock, and other things as well.

TBFH, I will be extremely pissed if me and Matt aren't still close buddies 20 years from now, 30 years from now, 40 years from now, and so on and so on.

Kyletherealninja
06-07-2007, 03:56 AM
Crap. I clicked this thread thinking it was going to be about the cereal.

Life is full of disappointments.

Jay
06-07-2007, 10:14 AM
You gotta love the Big Brother franchise. They're all over the world. :P

I was about to make a note of that.

Ardo, your grammar and basic sentence structure has gotten a whole lot better between the time you left us and now. Well done. :clap:

Roxie
06-07-2007, 10:54 AM
I think some of the anecdotes could've been trimmed and the transition from past to present could've been done more smoothly, but overall there is a definite improvement--good job.

Jay
06-08-2007, 09:51 AM
Not saying it's perfect yet, but it's increased exponentially. :D

Ardo Zubairu
07-04-2007, 10:34 AM
I was about to make a note of that.

Ardo, your grammar and basic sentence structure has gotten a whole lot better between the time you left us and now. Well done. :clap:

I use a technique called freewriting. in freewriting,you write continously for a fixed period of time.

Jay
07-04-2007, 10:37 AM
I know what free writing is.

Ardo Zubairu
07-04-2007, 10:55 AM
I know what free writing is.
According to peter elbow,a writing expert whohas revolunanized the teaching of writing,one of the reason we find writing so hardisthat wehavea set of censors inside our head. justas we set pen to paper ,those censors are ready to spring up and whisper,"that's not good,".however, do you notice that?

Trump
07-05-2007, 02:43 PM
Sure, but I don't even get to writing before that happens. My thoughts censor and contradict themselves before I realize it. If I could write as fast as I think it would be different because I could get all that stuff down on the paper, but as of now I'm usually thinking at least half a sentence if not two or three sentences ahead of where I actually am. So I was never very good at free writing. For now, I just write something just and try to make sure it says what I want it to say.

I understand the value of free writing in order to expose your thoughts, but I do not believe it has much of a place in published work. Why publish something if you are not trying to say something? So make sure it says what you want.

Ardo Zubairu
07-10-2007, 01:06 PM
Sure, but I don't even get to writing before that happens. My thoughts censor and contradict themselves before I realize it. If I could write as fast as I think it would be different because I could get all that stuff down on the paper, but as of now I'm usually thinking at least half a sentence if not two or three sentences ahead of where I actually am. So I was never very good at free writing. For now, I just write something just and try to make sure it says what I want it to say.

I understand the value of free writing in order to expose your thoughts, but I do not believe it has much of a place in published work. Why publish something if you are not trying to say something? So make sure it says what you want.
Ok, then use brainstorming which is oral. It’s most often done with others. In brainstorming, you say out loud as many ideas as you can think of in a fixed period of time. The goal simply is to produce as many ideas as possible, no matter how implausible, silly, or irrelevant: jot down the ideas that intrigue you as they come up. This will not produce high –quality ideas, but high quantity ideas, once you’ve determined what type of ideas you choose to publish.