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Beelzebub
11-17-2009, 03:22 PM
The following song is based on true events. I merely changed the girl's name. Let me know what you think of it.


Now this is a story all about how
My life got flipped, turned upside down
And I'd like to take a minute, just listen to me
I'll tell you how I fell in love with a girl called Julie

On the continent of Eurasia born and raised
Playing Pokémon is how I spent most of my days
Chilling out, maxing, relaxing all cool
And then studying physics after finishing school
When a black-haired white girl, who looked really good
Made me feel something I thought I never would
I found the love of my life and my heart got scared
It said: "Now go and admit your love to the girl with the black hair!"

I saw her on the street and when she came near
My heart began to race and I struggled with fear
If anything I can say that this was pure stress
But I thought "Nah, forget it, it's time to confess!"

She pulled out her umbrella when it started to rain
And I said to myself "Now do it, and ease the pain!"
I told her I loved her, but she didn't love me
So I said goodbye to the girl named Julie

h2orowe
11-17-2009, 08:47 PM
You forgot the part about sippin' orange juice out of a champagne glass. Otherwise, it's good.

stsparky
11-17-2009, 10:22 PM
http://imgs.xkcd.com/comics/rba.png

haterllnation
11-18-2009, 12:17 AM
Nice, but the ending was a downer. The Fresh Prince was not amused. He would like you to turn your story around and add another couple of "winner" lines. Otherwise, it worked.

Beelzebub
11-19-2009, 05:14 PM
Yeah, I know that the ending is a downer, but that's what actually happened, more or less.

haterllnation
12-05-2009, 07:40 AM
When you bounce back, just add some "winner" lyrics and post back here.